2.20.2013

Floating




It had been over half her lifetime since, but she kept lists and handfuls of things she remembered.  It began with glass doorknobs, and continued like this:  the small black-and-white tiles that made up the bathroom floor(always chilly in the early mornings), golden yellow kitchen walls (many breakfasts), ugly green carpets that were thick with dirt (before they were removed and left by the lightpost where the trashcan sat on the street), the radiator with the white metal box covering it (sitting, winter mornings, warm feet, book in hand).  She could pluck the little scraps of information, as they lazily floated through the air.  The list would continue on: windows (painted shut), third story attic (filled with boxes), deck, hard wood floor, green walls.  But a gust of wind came through town, for a whole year, and all the little pieces flew out(business class).  She stumbled for three months then, before realizing that they were gone.  


11 comments:

  1. i'm left feeling so confused after reading this. but the good sort've confused. i love it. oh and that picture, amazinggg! selfie? xx

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  2. sounds like my grandmother's house, which makes it all the more amazing and beautiful and nostalgic and all those other wonderful feelings. :) and like natalia said, I'm confused too, but it's a haunting, mysterious sort of confusion that is very, very good. :)

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  3. The pic is odd choice , but the writing is decent

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  4. this reminded me of nicole krauss and rainy days and the smell of the earth come november.
    beautiful.

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  5. Very emotional photograph. Tells a lot of different stories at once. Your words, of course, are wonderful. They also remind me of Nicole Krauss.

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  6. You are very good at writing. This piece was so lovely and yet emotional, gave me chills.

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